看一下这篇英语作文怎么样（初三）i'm proud of myself要求：What kind of person are you?What makes you proud of yourself?(give an example/examples)Why are you proud of yourself?正文：I'm hardworking,courageous and confident.I don't

看一下这篇英语作文怎么样（初三）i'm proud of myself要求：What kind of person are you?What makes you proud of yourself?(give an example/examples)Why are you proud of yourself?正文：I'm hardworking,courageous and confident.I don't
看一下这篇英语作文怎么样（初三）
i'm proud of myself
要求：What kind of person are you?
What makes you proud of yourself?(give an example/examples)
Why are you proud of yourself?
正文：I'm hardworking,courageous and confident.I don't give up playing the violin though I'm in Grade 3 and facing the pressure of the highschool entrance test,which makes me really proud of myself.My school teachers always praise me for my good marks and my violin teacher often lets me play the violin before other learners to set an example.Praised by so many people,I feel proud.But it is my hardworking,confidence and the strong will of never giving up that makes me proud of myself most.
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看一下这篇英语作文怎么样（初三）i'm proud of myself要求：What kind of person are you?What makes you proud of yourself?(give an example/examples)Why are you proud of yourself?正文：I'm hardworking,courageous and confident.I don't
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I don't give up playing the violin though I'm in Grade 3 and facing the pressure of the highschool entrance test,(which makes me really proud of myself.)不要写成一句,太乱

I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running .But as we all know,The students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam..At that moment,I just wanted to give up .but my parents encoura...

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I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running .But as we all know,The students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam..At that moment,I just wanted to give up .but my parents encouraged me:“impossible is nothing, ”“you could challenge yourself!”so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself ,though I didn’t get the good mark,I knew ,I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!

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