I want to be devoted myself to making our school more better.帮忙修改下,是不是有语病

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I want to be devoted myself to making our school more better.帮忙修改下,是不是有语病

I want to be devoted myself to making our school more better.帮忙修改下,是不是有语病
I want to be devoted myself to making our school more better.帮忙修改下,是不是有语病

I want to be devoted myself to making our school more better.帮忙修改下,是不是有语病
I want to devote myself to making our school better and better.这样的句子会比较好哦 首先是devote oneself to doing sth.表示致力于做某事 主动即可 不需要用被动形式的 其次more better 你发现了么 用了两次比较级哦 所以是有问题的呢 加油哦 希望对你有启迪的作用~