【急】请高手帮忙改下【英语作文】请帮忙改下这篇作文,我知道个别介词和句式使用不得当,请有错尽管改.如果可以的话请告诉我错因.直接改错句即可.The girl is tall,with long hair,wearing a pair of

【急】请高手帮忙改下【英语作文】请帮忙改下这篇作文,我知道个别介词和句式使用不得当,请有错尽管改.如果可以的话请告诉我错因.直接改错句即可.The girl is tall,with long hair,wearing a pair of
【急】请高手帮忙改下【英语作文】
请帮忙改下这篇作文,我知道个别介词和句式使用不得当,请有错尽管改.如果可以的话请告诉我错因.直接改错句即可.
The girl is tall,with long hair,wearing a pair of glasses.She is our monitor,which I admire most in our class.
She is a excellent leader in our class.She helps teachers to take charge of（管理,对否?） the class well.What’s more,at the School’s Sport Meeting,she lead（过去式,不懂） us training hard to compete in the programmas.
She is my closed friend,as well.She is always explaining the difficulties of study to me with patience.And it seems that she never be tired of my complex problems.I would never forget the words she told me,The silly bird should fly first.So she is such a person,who usually does some preview before others.So hardworking is she tha she gets a good result in study.
As a monitor,she is devoted to classwork.And as a friend,how kindhearted she is!Besides,she is a good example on study for me!

【急】请高手帮忙改下【英语作文】请帮忙改下这篇作文,我知道个别介词和句式使用不得当,请有错尽管改.如果可以的话请告诉我错因.直接改错句即可.The girl is tall,with long hair,wearing a pair of
The person that i admire the most in our class is our monitor.
Our monitor is a tall girl with long hair,and wears a pair of glasses.
She is an excellent leader in our class.She helps teachers manage the class.At the School’s Sport Meeting,she supervised the training,and helped our class win alot of prizes.
She is also a close friend of mine.She is always helps me patiently.And it seems that she never becomes tired of helping me.I would never forget that idiom(俗语,成语) she told me:The dim-witted bird should always fly first.She is such a person,that does things ahead of everyone else.And as a result,she gets good marks in study.
As a monitor,she is devoted to working for our class.As a friend,how kindhearted she is!And as a brilliant student,she is a good example for me to study!

take charge of 是接管的意思 最好用administrate.
过去式应该是led. 不用trainning 用work hard 就可以了。

lead led led
She is my closed friend,as well.
这个不能用closed 来修饰，换一个best之类的。
As a monitor,she is devoted to classwork.这里最好用devote oneself to 的句式，不要用被动