英文作文请帮忙修改下,有什么语法错误之类的~加点内容也好,道歉信Dear Ms Wong:Thank you for your letter of March 21 about I slept in the English lesson.I am aware of the consequences of this.But i honestly would like to let y

英文作文请帮忙修改下,有什么语法错误之类的~加点内容也好,道歉信Dear Ms Wong:Thank you for your letter of March 21 about I slept in the English lesson.I am aware of the consequences of this.But i honestly would like to let y
英文作文请帮忙修改下,有什么语法错误之类的~加点内容也好,
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Dear Ms Wong:
Thank you for your letter of March 21 about I slept in the English lesson.I am aware of the consequences of this.But i honestly would like to let you know the cause of this.
I am very sory to sleep in the classroom affected classmate and teachers.I am vey fond of watching TV.So,last Sunday,I watched TV did not go to bed until 3 oclock in the morning.I feel asleep in English class therefore sleep insufficiency.I konw that it it an offence and i apologize to you also to help me come out of this.please give me one chance and i acsure you that i will never do such a thing in life again.please allow me this time and will prove that i can clear the sleep do not happen in the claassroom.Please forgive me.please accept my profound apologies for this matter.
Yours Sincerely
Annie Chan

英文作文请帮忙修改下,有什么语法错误之类的~加点内容也好,道歉信Dear Ms Wong:Thank you for your letter of March 21 about I slept in the English lesson.I am aware of the consequences of this.But i honestly would like to let y
about是介词,后面怎么可以跟句子,你可以用同位语从句来表达你的意思：...about the matter that I slept in the English lesson .第二段开头一句话,你一句句子怎么可以有两个谓语动词,至少给它一个连词吧,或者可以用分词做伴随状语:把affected改成 ,affecting（注意要加这个逗号）； I watched TV did not go to bed until 3 oclock in the morning 这句也是同样的问题,在did 前加个连词and ; I feel asleep in English class therefore sleep insufficiency. 这句也是一样的问题,therefore 是副词,把它换成连词because,而且你sleep动词怎么可以用insufficiency这个名词修饰呢,所以从therefore开始全改掉,可以改成because l sleep insufficiently.然后acsure,应该是assure吧,please allow me this time and will prove that i can clear the sleep do not happen in the classroom. 这句中...and will prove...,改成and I will...；我不知道你clear the sleep 是什么意思,是扫除倦意还是?反正prove that i can clear the sleep do not happen in the claassroom. 这句宾语从句结构乱七八糟的,你直接简单点不行吗,可以是prove that i won't sleep again in the classroom. 反正语法错的地方你可以自己改,我打的句子你可以参考一下.

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Dear Ms. Wong,
Thank you for your letter dated March 21 regarding I sleeping in English class. I am aware of the consequences of this matter. I honestly would like to let you know the reason of th...

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Dear Ms. Wong,
Thank you for your letter dated March 21 regarding I sleeping in English class. I am aware of the consequences of this matter. I honestly would like to let you know the reason of this.
I am very sorry for sleeping in class, which affected my classmates and teachers. I love watching TV so much watching TV that I did not go to bed until 3 o'clock in the morning last Sundy. I then fell asleep in my English class. Please give me a chance and I assure you that I will never sleep in class again, ever. I sincerely apologize for what I have done. Please forgive me.
Yours truly,
Annie Chan

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Thank you for your letter of March 21 about I slept in the English lesson. I am aware of the consequences of this. But I honestly would like to let you know the cause of this.
I am very sory t...

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Thank you for your letter of March 21 about I slept in the English lesson. I am aware of the consequences of this. But I honestly would like to let you know the cause of this.
I am very sory to sleep in the classroom ，which affected classmates and teachers. I am vey fond of watching TV. So, last Sunday, I watched TV and did not go to bed until 3 oclock in the morning. I feel asleep in English class because of insufficient sleep . I konw that it is an offence to you and i apologize to you and wish you to help me get through this. please give me one chance again and i assure that i will never do like this again. please forgive me this time . i have known my fault. please accept my profound apologies for this matter.
Yours Sincerely

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