会英语的进来,帮我看一段对话有没有错,Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.You are lazybones.Peter:Yes,it's very late,but yesterday

会英语的进来,帮我看一段对话有没有错,Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.You are lazybones.Peter:Yes,it's very late,but yesterday
会英语的进来,帮我看一段对话有没有错,
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.
Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.You are lazybones.
Peter:Yes,it's very late,but yesterday I went to bed at twenty-three o'clock.
Alan:Wow,what's your usually get up?
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday is a particular case.
Alan:Oh,How are you feel today?
Peter:I'm soso.What about you?
Alan:I'm OK.
Peter:I want to go to the book city?You wanna come with?
Alan:That's great!Let's go.
Peter:OK,I will eat breakfast.Please wait me.
Alan:OK,Good bye.
Peter:Bye.
把最后改好的贴出来，也许对别人会有帮助
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is that 9090950?
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.What's wrong?I got up just now.
Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.Lazybones.
Peter:Yes,it's very late,but last night I went to bed at twenty-three o'clock.
Alan:Wow,when do you usually get up?
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday was a special.
Alan:Oh,How do you feel today?
Peter:Just soso.What about you?
Alan:I'm OK.
Peter:I want to go to the book center?Do you want to come with me?
Alan:That's great!Let's go.
Peter:OK,but I will have my breakfast first.Wait for my call.
Alan:OK,Good bye.
Peter:Bye.

会英语的进来,帮我看一段对话有没有错,Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.You are lazybones.Peter:Yes,it's very late,but yesterday
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?
后一个this换成that.
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.
Something happens 改成Anything happened?
get改成got
Alan:Wow,what's your usually get up?
改成：“when do you usually get up”
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday is a particular case.
后一句改成“Yesterday was a special”比较好
Alan:Oh,How are you feel today?
改成“How do you feel today”
差不多就这样吧

I'm soso
我觉得应该改成 just soso 更好一点

OK,I will eat breakfast.Please wait me. 你用的是中国人的逻辑了
不如就说一个ok就可以了后面的都省掉也没事 多了反而不好
上面的仁兄说的还不错
你也可以采纳一下他的意见

I got up just now
twenty-three 改为eleven都知道是晚上 不用23点
when do you usually get up?
How are you feel today改为how are you today或how are you feeling ?
book city?改为book center

Alan:...
Peter: ...Something happened? I got up just now.
Alan: ...You have lazybones
Peter: ...eleven o'clock
Alan: ...what time do you usually get up?
Peter:...Yesterday was a sp...

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Alan:...
Peter: ...Something happened? I got up just now.
Alan: ...You have lazybones
Peter: ...eleven o'clock
Alan: ...what time do you usually get up?
Peter:...Yesterday was a special case
Alan: ...feeling today
Peter:...
Alan: ...
Peter:...
Alan: ...
Peter: ...Please wait for me
Alan:
Peter

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