谁能帮我改改这段作文!谢谢!Take the environmental pollution for example. It is no doubt that almost all countries in the world all agree on reducing the environmental pollution on our mother world. However, with development of industry, hu

谁能帮我改改这段作文!谢谢!Take the environmental pollution for example. It is no doubt that almost all countries in the world all agree on reducing the environmental pollution on our mother world. However, with development of industry, hu
谁能帮我改改这段作文!谢谢!
Take the environmental pollution for example. It is no doubt that almost all countries in the world all agree on reducing the environmental pollution on our mother world. However, with development of industry, huge amounts of pollutants are being produced to destruct our environment. It is hardly possible that we can solve them within a short period of time. Furthermore, if we stop the expansion of industry, it will obstruct our development of economy.

谁能帮我改改这段作文!谢谢!Take the environmental pollution for example. It is no doubt that almost all countries in the world all agree on reducing the environmental pollution on our mother world. However, with development of industry, hu
for example 太平常,改用for instance.把no 变成beyong 岂不更好?把第二个all 删掉多余呀.如果是强调防污的广泛性和重要性的话,你不要用all countries 而直接用the world 表示世界各个角落都在防污.我们的最终目的是 将污染降低到最小,所以用reduce力度不够,再在后面加个定语从句,我改成这样,仅供参考：Take environmental pollution for instance,it is beyond doube that the world is fighting against pollution which should be elimilated.thanks!

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Take the environment pollution as an example, it's no doubt that almost all countries in the world agree on reducing environment pollution on our mother land. However, with the development of industry...

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Take the environment pollution as an example, it's no doubt that almost all countries in the world agree on reducing environment pollution on our mother land. However, with the development of industry, huge amounts of pollutants are being produced to contaminat our enviroment. it has less possibility that we can solve them within a short period of time.Furthermore, if we stop developing industry, it will prevent our development of economy.

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Take the environmental pollution as an example. There is no doubt that almost all countries in the world agree on reducing the environmental pollution to our mother earth. However, with the developmen...

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Take the environmental pollution as an example. There is no doubt that almost all countries in the world agree on reducing the environmental pollution to our mother earth. However, with the development of industry, huge quantities of pollutants are being produced to destruct our environment. But if we stop the expansion of industry, it will obstruct our development of economy. All in all, It is impossible that we can solve the problem in a short time.

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Take environmental pollution for example. It is no doubt that almost all the countries in the world
agree on reducing the environmental pollution on our mother earth. However, with development of...

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Take environmental pollution for example. It is no doubt that almost all the countries in the world
agree on reducing the environmental pollution on our mother earth. However, with development of industry, huge amounts of pollutants are being produced to destruct our environment. It is impossible that we can solve the problem
within a short period of time. Furthermore, if we stop the development of industry, it will influence the development of economy.

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