改错1、Indoors people often contact with friends by mobile phones.2、Indoors people often connect with friends through Internet.3\Addicted to virtual reality is one of the features of this way of living.4\If we go outside,we can keep contact touc

改错1、Indoors people often contact with friends by mobile phones.2、Indoors people often connect with friends through Internet.3\Addicted to virtual reality is one of the features of this way of living.4\If we go outside,we can keep contact touc
改错1、Indoors people often contact with friends by mobile phones.
2、Indoors people often connect with friends through Internet.
3\Addicted to virtual reality is one of the features of this way of living.
4\If we go outside,we can keep contact touch with the world.
5\What's worse,indoors people lac of communication with the outside world.
6\I am not a man stay alone for a long time.
7\Lacking in proper exercised does harm for one's health.
8\Staying at home for a long time is possible to make people become unhealthy.
9\People can't get enough sunlight and exercise,which contributing to gain weight.
10\Staying at home for long time does harm to people's health,which brings about weakness and sickness.
11\Lacking in the communication in the real world,they may feel separate from the society.
12\If someone is used to being an indoors person,he or she many feel disconnected to the real world.
13\Being an indoors person means that at home as long as you want.
14\What's worse,they turn a deaf ear to the things happened in thaeri daily life.
15\This kind of people prefer to stay at home than to go out.
16\If we always stay at home and sit in front of computer,the eyesight will fall.
17\Staying home can not breathe outside fresh air.
18\They can get everything they need through the Internet instead of going out.

改错1、Indoors people often contact with friends by mobile phones.2、Indoors people often connect with friends through Internet.3\Addicted to virtual reality is one of the features of this way of living.4\If we go outside,we can keep contact touc
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