英语帝帮我看看这篇作文的语法问题和表达不当之处The table shows the percentage of expenditure on three categories in consumable in five European countries in 2002.In Turkey,about the third expenditure was spent on food,drinks and

英语帝帮我看看这篇作文的语法问题和表达不当之处The table shows the percentage of expenditure on three categories in consumable in five European countries in 2002.In Turkey,about the third expenditure was spent on food,drinks and
英语帝帮我看看这篇作文的语法问题和表达不当之处
The table shows the percentage of expenditure on three categories in consumable in five European countries in 2002.
In Turkey,about the third expenditure was spent on food,drinks and tobacco,which took up the largest share in the five countries,followed by Ireland with 28.91%.The percentages of the remaining countries were pretty similar (18.80% in Spain,16.36% in Italy,15.77% in Sweden).
Refer to clothing and footwear,it seems that Italian prefer to buy these two items than the other countries,which cost them 9.00% in their spending.And around 6.5% money was consumed by Turkey,Spain and Ireland.Swedish people once again showed the least favor on the two goods like the former ones,with a percentage of 5.40%.
However,it is shocked that relatively less money was spent on leisure and education compared with other two categories.The country that devoted the largest percentage in expenditure was Turkey,with a figure of 4.35%,which was only 1.98% in Spain who stood in the last place.
Overall,food,drinks and tobacco was a principal daily spending in the five countries in 2002,more money supposed to devote into leisure and education.

英语帝帮我看看这篇作文的语法问题和表达不当之处The table shows the percentage of expenditure on three categories in consumable in five European countries in 2002.In Turkey,about the third expenditure was spent on food,drinks and
翻译得很不错.尤其是你认真诚恳的态度,让人不能不回答,更不能不认真回答.
我比较确定的改动用{}[]标示.感觉不太合适但又不知如何改处加?
只是个人看法,仅共参考.希望对你有所帮助.有疑问亦可QQ我.讨论哈.
The table shows the percentage of expenditure on three categories in consumable in five European countries in 2002.
In Turkey,about {the third} [one third of the] expenditure was spent on food,drinks and tobacco,which took up the largest share in the five countries,followed by Ireland with 28.91%.The percentages of the remaining countries were pretty similar (18.80% in Spain,16.36% in Italy,15.77% in Sweden).
{Refer to} [As to] clothing and footwear,it seems that {Italian prefer to buy these two items than the other countries?},which cost them 9.00% in their spending.And around 6.5% [of] money was consumed by {Turkey,Spain and Ireland?each of them?}.Swedish people once again showed the least favor on [in] the two goods like the former ones,with a percentage of 5.40%.
However,it is shocked that relatively less money was spent on leisure and education compared with other two categories.The country that devoted the largest {percentage in} [percent of] expenditure [in this category] was Turkey,with a figure of 4.35%,which was only 1.98% in Spain who stood in the last place.
{Overall} [In summary],food,drinks and tobacco was a principal daily spending in the five countries in 2002,[though] more money [was] supposed to devote {into} [to] leisure and education.

基本没什么问题。挺ok的

第三段的Refer to应为Refered to

这个表所占的比例在消费品支出三类五个欧洲国家在2002年。

在土耳其,大约第三支出被花在食物、饮料、烟草,所占比例最大,在5个国家,紧随其后的是爱尔兰28.91%。这个比例的剩余的国家是很相似的(18.80%在西班牙、意大利、15.77% 16.36%在瑞典)。

指服装和鞋类,似乎更喜欢买这两个意大利比其他国家的项目,他们在他们的支出费用9.00...

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这个表所占的比例在消费品支出三类五个欧洲国家在2002年。

在土耳其,大约第三支出被花在食物、饮料、烟草,所占比例最大,在5个国家,紧随其后的是爱尔兰28.91%。这个比例的剩余的国家是很相似的(18.80%在西班牙、意大利、15.77% 16.36%在瑞典)。

指服装和鞋类,似乎更喜欢买这两个意大利比其他国家的项目,他们在他们的支出费用9.00%)。金钱是围绕6.5%,被土耳其,西班牙和爱尔兰。瑞典人再次表明了两种商品的最小支持像前者,以一定比例的5.40%。

然而,它是相对较少的钱是震惊,花在休闲和教育与其他两大类。这个国家投入比例最大的开支是土耳其,带着4.35%,仅是在西班牙人1.98%站在最后的地方。

整体、食品、饮料、烟草是一个主要的日常开支的五国在2002年,更多的钱应该花到休闲和教育。
语法上基本没什么错

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