修改一篇ENGLISH DIARYMy father went to Xi Zang already four days.I was very long to see him.I think Xi Zang has many high mountains.I was worry my father materialize altitide sickness.My father is in La Sa now.I hope he has a good trip.Xi Zang pl

修改一篇ENGLISH DIARYMy father went to Xi Zang already four days.I was very long to see him.I think Xi Zang has many high mountains.I was worry my father materialize altitide sickness.My father is in La Sa now.I hope he has a good trip.Xi Zang pl
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My father went to Xi Zang already four days.I was very long to see him.I think Xi Zang has many high mountains.I was worry my father materialize altitide sickness.My father is in La Sa now.I hope he has a good trip.
Xi Zang plateau,a sacred place,a beautiful place,my father is on there,the sacred place!

修改一篇ENGLISH DIARYMy father went to Xi Zang already four days.I was very long to see him.I think Xi Zang has many high mountains.I was worry my father materialize altitide sickness.My father is in La Sa now.I hope he has a good trip.Xi Zang pl
西藏是Tibet 拉萨是Lhasa 圣地用Holy Land
My father has been to Tibet for 4 days.
I think there are many high mountains in Tibet.
I was worry about my father's altitude sickness.
My father is in Lhasa now.
Tibet plateau is a holy and beautiful place.My father is there now.What a holy land!

My father has been to XiZang(tibet) for 4 days. 第二句话什么意思没看懂.I think there is many huge mountains in XiZang.I am worried about my dad's health for the high altitide reflection. My father is in Lhasa no...

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My father has been to XiZang(tibet) for 4 days. 第二句话什么意思没看懂.I think there is many huge mountains in XiZang.I am worried about my dad's health for the high altitide reflection. My father is in Lhasa now. I hope he can has a good trip.Xizang, a sacred place, beautiful place, my father is there now.what a sacred place!

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My father have gone to Xi Zang already for four days. I longed to see him.I think there are many high mountains in Xi Zang.I aways worried about my father's health for his sickness(materialized altit...

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My father have gone to Xi Zang already for four days. I longed to see him.I think there are many high mountains in Xi Zang.I aways worried about my father's health for his sickness(materialized altitide sickness).My father is in Lasha now.I hope he has a good trip.
Xi Zang plateau,a sacred place,a beautiful place,my father is on there,the sacred place!

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My father has already been in Tibet for four days. It's a long time that i didn't see him.(事实上你的第二句话我没明白你要表达什么意思,我猜你想说我有好长时间没见到他了.) Anyway,I believe there are many high mountains in Tibet,so i am worr...

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My father has already been in Tibet for four days. It's a long time that i didn't see him.(事实上你的第二句话我没明白你要表达什么意思,我猜你想说我有好长时间没见到他了.) Anyway,I believe there are many high mountains in Tibet,so i am worried about he might have got altitude striss.(materialize altitide sickness你是想说高原反应吧).My father is in Lasa now, and i hope he has a good trip.
In brief, Tibet is a plateau as well sacred and beautiful where my father is.The sacred place!

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翻译得挺好，但是日记应该用过去时，例如 I think 就应该改为I thought.
"I was very long to see him."这句话很难理解，
long n.长时间，长时期
adv.长久地，长期地
adj.长的，时间久的
所以我认为这句话想表达的意思应该是“我已经好长时间没见到他了”....

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翻译得挺好，但是日记应该用过去时，例如 I think 就应该改为I thought.
"I was very long to see him."这句话很难理解，
long n.长时间，长时期
adv.长久地，长期地
adj.长的，时间久的
所以我认为这句话想表达的意思应该是“我已经好长时间没见到他了”.

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我的!~~~~
容我说一下,楼上的几位好象有些粗心哦!
错了几处语法.
My father went to Tibet 4 days ago.I didn't see him for a long time.I knew that there are many big mountains in Tibet. I am worried about my father's he...

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我的!~~~~
容我说一下,楼上的几位好象有些粗心哦!
错了几处语法.
My father went to Tibet 4 days ago.I didn't see him for a long time.I knew that there are many big mountains in Tibet. I am worried about my father's health for his sickness.My father is in La Sa now.I hope he can have a good trip. In brief, Tibet is a plateau as well sacred and beautiful where my father is.The sacred place!

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